Monday 2 October 2017

journal #2

This story is about Edmonton Oilers superstar captain Connor McDavid and The Toronto Leafs, Austin Matthews about there teams and the way there season will go." McDavid said. "We're very lucky that way that we have a lot of young faces in Edmonton, as well as a good mix of ols der guythat have played and been around the league. Yes I think that the heading of the story catches your attention. It uses the best players in the NHL's name as the heading and that's what we look for as hockey fans and players is the big name players and stories about them.The ending is good because it's all the players talking about how there last season went, and what there looking forward to for this year coming up. 
.http://www.tsn.ca/oilers-maple-leafs-lead-nhl-s-canadian-revival-1.872355

This article is about Arizona Coyotes forward Max Domi called for stricter immigration controls on Sunday in the wake of a violent attack in Edmonton.Really hope everyone in Edmonton is ok. We're behind you. This is why we have to be aware of some of the people we let into our country," said Domi, who added an emoji of a Canadian flag. This heading jumps out at you because it states about an attack in Edmonton and proffesional hockey players talking about the topic. They ended the article with a quoatation what Max said Do you care if anyone comes into our country and causes harm to our friends and family. Seriously. Let's have a conversation about this."

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